WWW:
- Great to see that you are up-to-date so far Cameron!! Yaaaayyyy! PLEASE KEEP THIS UP.
- Posts are generally visual - good effort to create contact sheets to demonstrate elements of an effective music video, and pics from the music video shoot to reflect on your role.
- Your reflective coments, analysis of 'The Fix' and www/ ebi comments show you have a clear sense of what elements make a good music video, and the need to think and plan carefully to ensure shot rotation, lighting and framing work together to create something that is visually spectacular
EBI:
- I think you could make the effort to include more pictures fromt he music video shoot - you also need to include the planning documents you created in your role as 'Lighting Engineer' - upload these
- Check your use of 'i / I' when referring to yourself in your written posts. never use a lower case 'i' - looks rushed and careless in year 13!
- I thought you made some really perceptive comments in your analysis of 'What Makes a Good Music Video' - good use of a contact sheet from 'The Fix' - but what about referring to other music videos from other genres too??
EFFORT: GD (make sure you upload lighting planning docs)
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