My own music video

http://youtu.be/IRVxEoK5-VQ

WWW:
-The lip synching is on time which makes the music video look very professional.
-The use of lighting adds to the party element of the mise-en-scene as they are very bright colours.

EBI:
-A more varied use of shots would have reduced viewer fatigue to almost zero.
-If the song had been finished the video would have been a lot more comprehensive.