Assessment 10th October 2011 JIN

Cameron,
I can see you have really attempted to catch up on the research posts of your blog. Well Done.
There are lots of good visuals here- sometime I think you could do more to really hit High Level 4.
Try to experiment with more technology and use http://www.screencast-o-matic.com/ for responses
I still need to see Post 10 & 11 your application of theory to videos from your genre.
Post 18- Adverts - have you evaluated any?
Post 17 Record Labels- This could be further developed with some imagery.
Post 13 Mood board from your Genre- This works well as a video but I did get viewer fatigue. Could you keep the voice over but add in some relevant images?
For you to get a really high coursework grade we need to see:
Lots of images posted in innovative ways
Detailed analysis using connotation and lots of Media Langauge.
I know you can do this Cameron.
Overall your progress is Very Good. Lets get to Excellent- you are very close! JIN